DIVORCE
According to some people, divorce is the solution if you don’t love
your couple anymore and you want to break up with him or with her. On the other
hand many people think that if you get divorce is because you are a bad person
and you can´t do it because when you get married with somebody, you have to
stay with that person for all your life.
I strongly agree with divorce because, if you get married with somebody,
and then, a couple of years later you have problems in your marriage you should
be able to get divorce.
For example if your husband beats you, it´s clearly that you have to
leave him, but according to other people, you have to stay with him until you
die.
Personally I think that if I’ll get marriage someday, first I have to
now so well the person who I marry if I don’t want to divorce in the future.
In conclusion I think you can divorce if you think you can´t stay with
your husband or with your wife anymore.
In general, revise the use of punctuation, above all of commas. The structure is perfect. Very clear. Congrats!
ResponderEliminarBe careful with:
"get divorce" = "get divorced" (l.4)
"is because" = "it is because" (l.4)
"it's clearly" = "it's clear" (l.10)
"I'll get marriage" = "I'll get married" (l.12)
"to now" = "to know" (l.13)
"I marry" = "I'm marrying" (l.13)
"divorce" = "get divorced" (l.14)
Grade: 7