Three friends and I met at 16:00 in the town hall for about 4 months
ago and we took the bus and we went to Segovia. When we arrived the bus that we
had to catch to arrive to the cinema had already gone so we had to wait like 1
hour for another bus.
When we arrived to the cinema the film that we wanted to watch had
started so we had to watched a horror film but we were along in the room so we
were really scared when the film had ended we went dinner but we had to eat so quickly
or the left another bus, we didn´t have time so we had to eat in the bus,
thankfully the bus driver didn´t see us.
When we arrived to the bus station we took the wrong ticket so we had
to buy another one. The bus was very slowly and there were a lot of traffic so
we arrived home two hours later and our parents got angry with us.
At first we were so angry too but now is so funny.
Be careful with:
ResponderEliminar-"for about" remove "for" (l.1)
-"had to watched " = "had to watch " (l.7)
-"along" = "alone" (l.8)
-revise punctuation
-"or the left" I don't really understand this sentence
-"now is" you need a subject "it is" (last line)
Grade: 6,5