FIRST DAY AT HIGH-SCHOOL
I remember
that the night before my first day at high school I was really nervous and I couldn´t
sleep anything so when I woke up I was so tired. In my first year I was only 12
years old so we were in 2012. I went with my friends Mar, Ana, Belén and Inés
and when we arrived the older students painted our faces. Then when that
finished we went to primary school to see our old teachers and to say goodbye
to them.
Very well written, just revise punctuation!
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